while I like the drawings, their combination with the purposefully vague and mysterious/mystical terminology like 'embeddings' and 'attention' make the entire document feel like one of those pamphlets that cults or 'science-based' religions produce

Cool idea!

But you should decrease the amount of the text. Because it's hard to watch and hard to read. Also, text fonts should be changed. Look at some cool design examples.

Before you show info via infographics or animations or anything else you have to watch a lot of cool examples and then find one to follow.

Really cool ! What did you make the cartoon with ?

Really cool!

awesome project :)